Friday, August 21, 2009

DREAM GARDEN


walled in limestone, the garden was shaded by oaks, maples, and ash and cooled by a spring fed brook – everywhere there were flowers – assemblages of anemones, crowds of calla lilies, and knots of narcissus – but the tulips and roses outshined them all among the islands of lush bluegrass – it was like Eden – with fruit trees and vines and flagstone paths and the birds – the birds were abundant beyond description – there were warblers and oriels and finches – every kind of brightly colored songbird and hummingbirds and bees – paths ran throughout the garden and though its heart – in the very heart was a great gnarled oak – it was squat and wide with extremely large branches protruding perpendicular to the trunk – from the largest of these hung an enormous wind chime made from bronze tubing, like a pipe organ and its low mysterious tones could be heard from anywhere along the paths within the walls – occasionally, next to the paths there would be a most comfortable bench – when seated on a bench or walking on the paths, the garden was a magical place and it smelled like goodness and peace and mystery

1 comment:

  1. Good piece. There is a tiny bit of editing to be done, a comma, the addition of an r to "though."

    Is this based on an actual garden you recall, or is it meant to be an ideal garden?

    Does the garden witness something? Does the garden know something? Does the garden do something? Or does the garden remain the same no matter what else happens around it?

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